I'm proud of this piece of writing because I didn't make it up It was hard to get all the details out of my brain into the computer.
when completing this piece of writing I learnt it's easier to write about something that has happened.
following this piece of writing there will be more editing and become a better piece of writing.
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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